to my longest and dearest Friend
i woke up,
....still drunk
maybe i'll sit in a church to sober up
....its been happening too much
why dizzy me up?
....but, i've been workin hard
i think i'm hung up
....no, not at school
these words, i need to throw up
....at the promises i gave, You
don't worry, i'm still lookin up
....didn't think it'd be that hard to keep
i came around and choked up
....never been so aware of being so weak
what is this getup?
....i'd rather be nude
i woke up,
....You You You You You
....still drunk
maybe i'll sit in a church to sober up
....its been happening too much
why dizzy me up?
....but, i've been workin hard
i think i'm hung up
....no, not at school
these words, i need to throw up
....at the promises i gave, You
don't worry, i'm still lookin up
....didn't think it'd be that hard to keep
i came around and choked up
....never been so aware of being so weak
what is this getup?
....i'd rather be nude
i woke up,
....You You You You You
5 Comments:
smart girls write smart poems
beautiful girls write beautiful poems
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No. I liked it better without all this fancy punctuation. Better more interpretive.
Also, the title is less dramatic, it kind of sounds like you're talking to Jesus.
Still, it is angst without stupid. And real.
If you had a time machine, you would never get anything done!
youre ridiculous my emo queen
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