<b>D' Steel(e)</b> <em>Society of Poetics</em>: to my longest and dearest Friend

D' Steel(e) Society of Poetics

A Society of Progressive Poets founded in Washington DC

Friday, October 20, 2006

to my longest and dearest Friend

i woke up,
....still drunk

maybe i'll sit in a church to sober up
....its been happening too much

why dizzy me up?
....but, i've been workin hard

i think i'm hung up
....no, not at school

these words, i need to throw up
....at the promises i gave, You

don't worry, i'm still lookin up
....didn't think it'd be that hard to keep

i came around and choked up
....never been so aware of being so weak

what is this getup?
....i'd rather be nude

i woke up,
....You You You You You

5 Comments:

Blogger mike said...

smart girls write smart poems

beautiful girls write beautiful poems

2:42 PM  
Blogger Laser! Beam said...

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5:44 PM  
Blogger mike said...

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12:49 AM  
Blogger mike said...

No. I liked it better without all this fancy punctuation. Better more interpretive.

Also, the title is less dramatic, it kind of sounds like you're talking to Jesus.

Still, it is angst without stupid. And real.

If you had a time machine, you would never get anything done!

11:08 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

youre ridiculous my emo queen

8:52 PM  

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